Monday, August 23, 2010

Can i get some advice on my homies rhyme?

Got my red hat, yea got my red hat, just like my six four it switch from front to back,... I got my red hat, tweak it to back while im ridin shotgun in the 'lac that my homie just jacked, when my cap is to tha side all tha honeys call me fly - they like the way it shines with the emblem that represents NY, my hat be so fine, anyone say otherwise - ill hit you with my nine - it should be a crime to mess with a starter like mine- if i was a judge itd be 25 ta lifeCan i get some advice on my homies rhyme?
Ummm. the lyrics need some work. Maybe if it has a good beat it might sound good.

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